Thread:MondlichtPanda/@comment-37484301-20190728181311/@comment-36836718-20190730200243

Since I already have an on-going conversation with the user I contacted them.

I also came across a page where the grammar is so odd that even I who played the chapter recently don't understand what some sentences are supposed to say... https://choices-stories-you-play.fandom.com/wiki/Rescue_of_Adrian_Raines

I added some info (the section called trial actually didn't have any info on the trial) and fixed some grammar. But the whole page still needs a lot of work to be readable...