User blog comment:Cheetos8089/Review of The Freshman/Sophomore/Junior/Senior/@comment-27680174-20181030171312/@comment-36836718-20181030172035

" 4. I hated the Alphas. Not because of what they did. They were just really terrible and poorly written villains in general. The idea of a greek life organization forcing it's members to commit crimes as their inititation is an interesting concept, but the execution was just...ugh. And how did they get exposed? Nathan wouldn't shut up. He openly blabed to the "vigilante" who tried to take him down that he is a criminal who believes he'll get away with everything. He wasn't like Anton Severus who had a terrorist group as his henchmen and he wasn't like The Birchport Killer who didn't expose himself until he was sure that all threats to him were neutralized. "

Second that! The moment I saw Nathan and read that TJ would feature a greek life organization I immediately thought of Logan from Gilmore Girls. And Nathan is really stupid for a villain. His explanation for telling the MC about Beau is that he wanted to get rid of the others? But by doing this he only got himself into trouble because if he hadn't told her, she wouldn't have had anything to start her investigation. So every clue he gave her was one that brought him down...