Talk:Baby Bump, Book 1/@comment-33952467-20200127230446

I needed more diamonds so I started this book, but honestly it’s unreadable. The story is flat and full of cliches ("Boy meets girl--Boy pursues girl-- Boy marries girl. The end.) All the characters (especially the MC) get on my nerves.

Imo, she's one of the most obnoxious MCs in the history of Choices. She constantly whines, throws a tantrum like a 5 y.old, refuses to take any responsibility for her actions and acts like the world revolves around her. Why would anyone wanna be friends with such a person or hire her for a job? I personally prefer strong female characters like queen Kenna from the Crown and the Flame, the MC from A Courtesan of Rome and the MC from It Lives in the Woods