Thread:Mrs. Vega/@comment-37484301-20200209224250/@comment-37484301-20200210205654

First, I did not think I needed to explain what "memorable" means. I assumed you would go through all of his dialogue and pick the best of the best, but instead it feels like you took all the dialogue that he has spoken throughout the entire book and put all of it under "memorable quotes". Out of all the quotes you listed, if you believe all of them are memorable, then basically none of them are. Or rather, which do you think are the most memorable? that encompass his personality? If you are the one who has been working on his page, then I assume you know where you had listed the quotes earlier; I will list where the quotes are found. I have been trying to incorporate the rest of the quotes into the personality and relationship sections, so that your work doesn't go to waste but if you think I am carelessly deleting them, I can stop and ask an Admin to explain it. These are the quotes you listed: -- This is basically mentioned under Personality; I had not moved this quote there (yet). -- While this shows Vega's relationship with Priya, I don't know how this is memorable? "Get away from her!" is basic dialogue that could and probably has been said by other love interests in other books. -- Again... basic dialogue that can be incorporated into his personality without the actual quotation marks.

-- These could be incorporated into Relationships - Priya section, but why do you think these are memorable? -- This could be incorporated into Relationships - Gaius section without the quotes. -- This is already under Relationship- Adrian section.

-- Why are these memorable? -- This can be added to Personality OR Relationships - Adrian, and as a description rather than an actual quote.

-- These can be added to expand the Relationships - Adrian section. --This is actually the quotation at the top of his page which doesn't need to be repeated. --This is already listed under Relationships - Adrian

--Basically already described under Personality 

-- Can be used to expand Relationships - Adrian without the actual quotes.

-- Can be used in Personality section unless already there. -- This is already under Personality section. -- This is already under Personality section.

The reason behind suggesting putting it all on your profile was if you wanted to create a shrine to him, to include all the normal, incidental dialogue that he spoke in the books that do not belong on his page or are already on his page in a description-format rather than straight quoted dialogue. If you take a look at other character pages, no character page has all the dialogue ever spoken by the character on the page.