Thread:SeaniiBoi/@comment-3452092-20171119044143/@comment-33352996-20180112212615

1) Yes, the when is very important. One possibility was direclty after they had imprisoned "Mr. Red" (or is it Ms. Red now?), while everyone was heading back, or of screen. This could imply that When Jane became Ms. Red (this is totally gonna catch on), she immediately went to Noah because she was still angry at you for letting her die and for not helping her when she blew the whistle. I think it happened becaue Jan knew that Dan was skeptic abou the supernatural, so she got into his head and influenced him to come into the woods, setting everything in the book into motion.

2) Now that you mention it, Noah has been forced into an awkward situation. He is being forced to relive the trauma he face as a kid, and not he has an opportunity to end it, without any consequences: he gets his siter. He gets his friends. He gets his mother approval. In his eyes, everybody wins. I don't think however, he's going to sacrafice his friends or himself, because like I stated before, he wants to keep everyone close to him alive. There is aslo alot of "maybes" in my head, but more "what ifs?" Such as, what if Noah had been fooling the group the whole time? Hopefully, when this book (and the possible second) end I think it needs three things:



a)  A really cool catchphrase (something like "playtime's over')

b) A way to get serious with a friend in the group

c) some sort of connection to at least 1 (or maybe 5) other books.

-S