Talk:The Freshman, Book 3/@comment-33719824-20180104062717

The fact that you HAVE to be mean to Zig after the drama at Kaitlyn concert is killing the “choices” concept. I mean, the guy stood up for you. Yes, he has a short temper issue, but being that mean about it, because of Kaitlyn who was a total B-word for 2 books? I don’t want to be friends with her. I don’t want her to say that MC is wrapped around her life, cause I’m taking every chance to avoid her. I know it’s a big plot in the chapter, with all the scholarship stuff. But with his temper and Kaitlyn being mean and getting out of it, they could’ve play with dialogs better to get to the same outcome without us thinking:”seriously? It’s not what I would say to the guy who protected me from bully by just pushing him in a chest and saving me from all the chaos”