Talk:The Royal Masquerade/@comment-3324285-20200404191855/@comment-39681492-20200421033921

[editing this to start over]

Smaller points: - They're more commonly referred to as House Charms, not Treasures. - The Fierro Charm is the Sun Pendant and you have to press it to "turn it on." There's no incantation. - You call Cyrus "Cyril" a couple of times. (You might also want to look at the last paragraph in the Sapphire Comb section. It could describe how MC can take the comb and how it affects Cyrus a little more clearly.) - I don't think anything specifies that the Charms are given by the current monarch, just that they can only be gifted by the King/Queen. - The Charms are the "right" or "property" of the Head of House, and said person can grant their use to whomever they choose.

Broader points: I think you embellish a little bit more than what is definitively known on a couple of points, like when you describe the dress that the diamond will make with the Jade Mirror and the size of the sword shard the Crown Shield uses during the battle with the Assassin. And when you say the Scarlet Cloth can "restore to full condition" any object, that implies it can repair something, rather than just cleaning it. We have no evidence the Cloth can do anything other than clean anything it touches.

I also think you're assuming a lot when you talk about the materials used with the Jade Mirror. You make it sound like Vasco has his own stash of charmed jewels, when he doesn't -- he only has Kendra's diamond. The rest are the ones given to Annalisa by Kendra. It's also odd that you say Annalisa "typically" uses pearls and opals, when she really is just using whatever was given to her. It isn't her fault Vasco has MC use the ruby or garnet or whatever the red stone is he gives her when she uses the mirror before the ascension party.