Talk:Baby Bump, Book 1/@comment-26069469-20200316181242/@comment-34138917-20200316194616

Why, Pixelberry? Why? Why?!

I don't care about any of the characters. I don't like MC. I don't even like the two (as opposed to three or more) love interests. Covington bored me, and Miles/Myra was okay, but Pixelberry kept addressing Myra using he/him terms at certain points of the book because they just couldn't be bothered to proofread. Think back to the time we were told the governor's wife was named Caroline, then she proceeded to tell us to call her Abigail.

The friend group felt totally unnatural and forced except for MC's sister and overall, I didn't grow attached to it. The antagonists, Cassandra and Craig, were weak and went down easily. Like...why? Bad antagonists typically equal a bad book, as a lot of people gleaned from AtV (I mean, the antagonists were nonexistent for like half the book).

I didn't spend a single diamond on this book, and I know a ton of other people didn't either. So how did this book get a sequel?