User blog comment:HersheysAlmonds/FanFic Choices/@comment-36606206-20180913085324/@comment-35562984-20180916142238

@TourmalineJem yah I like this angle. (following StoryGirl's suggestion with moods)

Dan (shocked): "What is going on? Did you just...I mean.. why are we kissing?"

MC (down): "I...this will be hard to explain...but I thought I was going to lose you...and I don't know what else to do to get through to you so I just.."

-silence-

MC (neutral): "I'm really glad that you're back. (angry) But this isn't over, we need to get out of here and save our friends. They were taken away by Mr. Red."

Dan (shocked): "Mr. Red?! So he's really back?! What exactly happened?

MC (shocked): "I'll tell you on the way! We need to go now!"

-MC stops short-

MC (down): "Also, I'm sorry I did what I did earlier. But there is something I wanted to tell you for a long time. (happy) Being in a life threatening situation I think now would be the best time to say it.

-MC breathes in deeply-

MC (down): Dan...I've liked you since we were kids....I just didn't know how to tell you for years. Then suddenly you became popular and we drifted apart so I thought I will never get the chance to tell you how I feel. But when I found you in the woods almost lifeless I kept telling myself the moment you wake up again I will tell you how I truly felt."

-both were silent-

MC (shocked): "I think we need to go now and find our friends. I already said what I wanted to say."

-Dan hugs MC from behind-

Dan (neutral): "I have been hiding alot of things for years. Having depression...being scared of the woods...talking to a therapist...and not admitting my feelings to the person I like."

MC (shocked): "What do you mean?"

Dan (down): "I thought I could face everything on my own. But when we spoke again in the auditorium, I suddenly remembered the good times. (neutral) And I wanted to be with everyone again..with you. So I decided to go back to the woods. To face my fears and once I am free of those shackles...I was going to confess to you."

Dan (happy): "MC, I like you too. For a very long time"

(ಥ﹏ಥ) my gad