Thread:MondlichtPanda/@comment-4786757-20200629211008/@comment-36836718-20200715120316

Update: I prepared at least some relationships for Luther and added some short info about Diavolos. I will work on it over the next days or so but if anyone wants to help, you're welcome to do so. I feel that there's already a lot of relationship information in his other sections, but there are also odd tense changes so moving it would be difficult. One sentence in the present, the next one in the past, then present, past,...

I also noticed that under family, Diavolos is listed as dead while Zenobia is listed as alive... O.O does anyone know why?

And his is not the only page that needs a lot of work. Kenna also had some grammar problems that no one seems to have noticed. Vassilios has a background section that includes information that would better suit as example for the personality or relationship information...

Is this still okay or already too subjective, maybe even bashing the book? https://choices-stories-you-play.fandom.com/wiki/Queen_B_Theory_Page?diff=331361&oldid=330924