Talk:Across the Void/@comment-36778906-20181202054033

This could end up being the longest book in Choices. The book went on a "mid-book break" last month and was up to Chapter 13. While that doesn't mean for certain that the book will be 26 chapters, The Royal Romance Book 3 had a "mid-book break" after its 9th chapter and ended up being 22 chapters long, so the second "half" of this book could easily be just as long as the first.

As for why the book will be on hiatus for at least another three months, it's probably because they want to improve the book in the second half and given reasonable justification for this book to be a series. At least they didn't cut it short or it would have been finished already and probably wouldn't get a sequel because of how bad the critical reception would have been.

There are some ideas for the rest of the book that Pixelberry are hopefully working on, including making sure that Pax and Eos don't overshadow the main character (or at least making them more likeable), more information on the war, more opportunities for badass space battles (as seen in the first chapter), giving the already established love interests more depth and more complex moral decisions. The best idea in my opinion would be making the main character, Pax and Eos a loving sibling team that are good at what they do, both together and apart even though they sometimes get on each other's nerves like all siblings. Not like the current dynamic which is essentially two adults constantly acting like out of control teenagers and causing more problems than they solve, to the sheer annoyance of their poor sibling.