Talk:Raleigh Carrera/@comment-33761718-20190922152053

God it's been so long since PB created such great rebel character.

I really loved how (s)he slowly moved from being wary and closed to admitting that (s)he felt something for the MC. The pace was perfect. But then, we get this sweet, sweet diamond scene when (s)he after drunk confess that it's like every song (s)he ever written was about our character, but (s)he didn't know that yet and then (s)he pretty much runs away :D But after that suddenly (s)he started to openly admit that (s)he fell in love with the MC. Like there wasn't one proper conversation between these two points - one moment (s)he's so scared of even the very thought about those feeelings, and in the next (s)he has no problem with them, not at all.

Also, something weird happend with his/her character around the same time - (s)he started to be sweet and protective even in the intimate scenes (without ANY teasing or sarcasm) and ok, it's fine, but in the last diamond scene in the last chapter (s)he's suddenly back to the old character - witty, teasing MC all the time (with visible strong feelings, but without loosing the personality).

It was like from the middle of the book someone else took over, and in the last chapter the original author took up again. The difference in character was really noticeable.