User blog comment:Bigmacattack667/Book idea-Spellbound/@comment-36277500-20191105141316

(SPOILER) The main villain is your sibling, and your father is Bhaal himself.

Me (higs-fives You): Hi, fellow RPG fan!

I relly feel the climate. Your story is very charming (pun intended), and its scenario seems way better than most of newest original Choices' books (read: forced romances with bland LIs and dull plot).

+A, not -B, I'd say.