Talk:Your Character (The Royal Romance)/@comment-27005398-20180113170403/@comment-3452092-20180114223454

That is mostly true and that is a problem. If she is in a relationship with Maxwell, the only love interest she sees between Liam telling her about breaking it off with Madeleine and seeing him that night, she expresses concern about what the night will hold, but mostly in concern for what it will mean for her and Maxwell. Other than the chance to not do romantic interactions, she doesn't try to soften the blow for Liam and if she goes into it knowing she's not going to say yes, she really should.

Honestly, she should have tried to keep him from proposing. She was almost certain that was what was coming, but she lets him anyway.

It's hard to get some time alone with him, but there have been enough opportunities that if she was in a relationship with Drake or Hana she really should have told him, not just before he could propose to her, but before he was going to propose the first time (if she was in a relationship with them at that point) or at some point in book two. Realistically the options needed to keep track of so many options would have been annoying to pixelberry, but it should have been an option to tell him sooner. He shouldn't have been blindsided like that if she wasn't going to be with him. With Maxwell, it's a little more complicated since he becomes a love interest only two chapters prior, but there is a chapter in between and at least in the diamond option to go to Coney Island, there should have been a chance to bring it up.

And even if they absolutely had to bring it to that point where he is broken up with Madeleine and she can't tell him anything prior to going to meet him outside the bar, there should have been a chance to try to tell him before he could propose.