Talk:Home for the Holidays/@comment-33719824-20180118212254

I was excited for this book when it was coming out couple weeks before Christmas. But it was when I was hoping it is a short book and culmination is coming around holidays, because you know it’s a book about holidays. I have no sympathy to any of LIs: -Nick is hot, but it’s not your fault that he got stuck here and it’s not your job to entertain him, just leave him in motel. -Wyatt. You tried, you broke up and he’s kinda creepy. The MCname airplane? -Holly. Why do you suddenly fall in love with your childhood friend? Can anyone imagine the situation? Especially when she’s super nice because you might open some doors for her.

MC: is she possessed by holiday spirit? What’s wrong with her? The most hated MC so far...

If you have someone SO excited about everything going on around, something is wrong with this person.

PB gives us MC we would never act like without any “choices”

And EVERY chapter so far has the same scenario:

-OMG, it’s a “Snowman_Nipple_Fart_Day”

Nick: I hate it, it’s lame, but I have to, if you convince me

MC: Weeeeee, I convince you!

MCs mom: weeee

Charles: if mom says wee I say wee

Dylan: I’m mocking Nick, because he’s a successful dude who doesn’t like Christmas, and I’m a teen who can’t hook up with a girl without my sister spending REAL freaking LIFE money

—-Event—-

MC to Nick: isn’t it everything you’ve dreamed about????

Nick: *thinking about Barbados, hot girls, letting a little smirk*

MC: I saw that! You love it here!!!

Nick: What? Where am I?!

I feel like the book is someone’s side project. Like for diploma xD