Talk:Across the Void/@comment-37207511-20181115070654

This book is a whole mess and I'm sad because the universe they built had the potential for a great story. It's all so lackluster. Bad writing, bad character development. Pax is probably the best written of all the characters because she's the only one with half a personality, but it would have been way more interesting to have her fully aligned with and hacking for the Jura. idk. It's just hard to get into the whole civil war thing and pick a side when we're thrust into this universe with no prior knowledge of the conflict or how it started. Curious to see how PB is going to salvage whatever chapters remain.