Thread:Fearless Diva/@comment-37484301-20181216003311/@comment-36836718-20181220094740

Now I finally figured out where to find the link to the version comparison so we can discuss it here (I started the message on his page since I didn't know how to do it at the time and therefore linked it here as I thought it would be easier that way)

[//choices-stories-you-play.wikia.com/index.php?title=Damien_Nazario&diff=129914&oldid=129853 https://choices-stories-you-play.wikia.com/index.php?title=Damien_Nazario&diff=129914&oldid=129853]

In one edit, I changed/added four things and as you reverted the edit altogether, I assume than you don't agree on any of it. But I don't understand why none of it was able to stay. So I hope you help me understand.

1.+2. The Mean Girls reference. I added book and chapter reference for said reference since we always add the chapter for real life references.

VeronicaAlonsoCastillo, who is currently banned for vandalism across several pages, recently changed the formatting of said reference that had been included with correct formatting on his page for a long time. Across all pages, we use to write real life films in italics. (Example: Michael's promposal in Book 3, Chapter 11 pays homage to the iconic 1989 teen classic Say Anything... starring John Cusack). She changed it on his page. And we always make sure that direct quotes, option texts etc are exactly the way they appear in-game. He consistently said perfect and perfection to stress those words. That was lost in her edit so the quote is no longer the way it was in-game

3. When we write "it is revealed in chapter 3..." it reads as "it is revealed to everyone, no matter what you do". But Damien being Puerto Rican and speaking Spanisch wasn't mentioned at all in my game. All I did was add info that it isn't revealed to everyone and that it depends on options the player has picked at some time. I still remember the discussion about Beckett's attunement reveal when someone added it like "it is confirmed in chapter x" because it later turned out to be only revealed to metal-atts and in the meantime everyone else got confused and started asking why the info was there because they didn't get the info in their game.

4. The middle name. It is only mentioned in his infobox and in trivia section. (Although the middle name also wasn't revealed in my game, so I guess it's info only revealed in a premium scene or otherwise determinant on your choices.) What isn't mentioned is his attitude towards his middle name. In the premium scene that I took quite at the beginning, they play a game where they either have to answer the question truthfully or if they don't, they have to drink. I asked about why he no longer worked at the police and he told the story of Beitan. Nadia asks him what his middle name is and he chooses to drink instead and, with a red background, tells all of them to no longer investigate about his middle name. I consider it interesting info that he is already able to give a rough outline on what happend in Beitan, but doesn't want to reveal his middle name. But I didn't think to be relevant for any of the other sections so I added it to trivia.

As you have completely reverted my edit, I can only interpret it the way that you don't agree on anything of those. If you just had removed part of it or changed the wording, I would have known immediately what was wrong. Or if you had inserted a summary on why you reverted it, such as "reverted because of wrong formatting". So that way I have been stuck since several days and speculating what was wrong. So I hope that you have the time sometime to explain what was wrong so I can avoid my fault in the future. (I also hope that you don't consider my repeated question as annoying, but I always strive to become a better editor so I would appreciate any help to achieve this)