Talk:Witness: A Bodyguard Romance/@comment-34483549-20200525201341

I try not to be too negative on public forums so I'm going to express my thoughts while still trying to be relatively nice about it.

This is insanity at this point. The amount of diamonds per chapter for trivial choices (being nice in any way shape or form, being understanding and caring in any way shape or form, and even for more romance) is CRAZY. The amount of diamonds it takes to actually unearth the story (is there a story at this point, 12 chapters in?) is ridiculous. I understand wanting to try something new to try and reach a new audience but this wasn't the way to do it. Having to spend diamonds on choices where literally nothing happens is disappointing, especially because PB has done such a great jobs with a lot of their other stories in Choices.

I'm hoping in Volume 2, since apparently there will be a volume 2 for this series, they go back to their original format that they've been using since the launch of this app. For a long time, Baby Bump was the least interesting story for me (because the LI's and the friends are just uninteresting) but this has, as of chapter 12, officially taken over that role. This is incredibly disappointing because all of the other books with 1 LI (With Every Heartbeat, A Very Scandalous Proposal, The Nanny Affair, The Royal Masquerade) were done so well (yes, The Nanny Affair is relatively new but it started off on a much better foot to me personally than Witness did). Keeping my fingers crossed that volume 2, if that's still happening, listens to the voice of the fandom and changes the format and makes the story a bit more palatable.

Long rant over. Tried to be as nice as possible.