User blog comment:HersheysAlmonds/Most Wanted FanFic/@comment-36606206-20181007100206

Okay since my fingers ached for awhile, I'm gonna make my review straightforward...

1. It's shocking but not too shocking. Cliff being forced was 50 - 50. But it was shocking that the man hung him just because he talked back...

2. It was shorter than the others, but it was understable since you sliced it into half.

3. Place the punctiation marks in their valid places

4. You...you can just put this THIS CHAPTER CONTAINS SCENES OF EXTREME VIOLENCE. VIEWERS DISCRETION IS ADVISED"" thing only in chapter 1 since no one likes a repeating warning

Rating: 4.7/5.0 well done. (claps) :)

(goes to the relaxation room to put my fingers in a bowl of warm water)