Talk:The Heist: Monaco/@comment-36778906-20181208074138

I wonder how long this book will be. If the entire book is based around a single heist and the majority of the book is spent preparing for it (with a large chunk of the preparing involving assembling a crew), then the book may be short or contain a lot of filler. If most of the book revolves around preparation, then there should be some variety, such as obtaining the required vehicles, weapons and other equipment. There should be multiple chapters spent pulling off the final heist and at least one or two chapters after the heist should explore what the main characters do with their share of the money (and at least some choice in what we spend our money on).

Also, multiple endings sound nice, especially distinct endings that amount to more than who we choose as our love interest at the end. There are a few possibilities for endings in this book:

Best Ending: Every crew member survives and avoids capture,walking away with the maximum amount of money. All characters spend their share of the money on the things they've always wanted (with us getting to choose what the MC spends their money on).

Worst Ending: Every optional crew member dies and the main characters get captured, no money is available at the end of the book and the epilogue of what the main characters did with the money is replaced by a short sequence of them in prison instead.

In-between Endings: Some optional crew members die or get captured and/or the main characters don't walk away with all the money they were expecting but evade capture nonetheless.