User blog comment:Superherofanatic1999/Comparing Across The Void to It Lives Beneath, Perfect Match, and Elementalists/@comment-6556552-20181027014356

Honestly I think the biggest problem with ATV is that it doesn't feel like a coherent story more like how fanfiction is writtren where they just make up things as they go without a basic outline for story to follow. It has zero flow and seems to forget things. The whole Zekei LI thing it a huge thing in the first chapter it made it clear the he was the MC's love intrest and close friend but now 12 chapters in and there has been nothing not even as far as friendship.