Thread:Fearless Diva/@comment-3452092-20171222192243/@comment-3452092-20171227033008

I'm not sure. I know I'd like to see more about how the four men became friends, especially how Tariq fits into that, because he is so different from the other three. I want to know more about the assassination attemps. I want to know who killed Liam's mother and I want to see at least an entire chapter (preferably an entire mini book at least six chapters long with characters at stake we've never seen before so that we can deturmine their fate) dedicated to the assassination attempt that brought Drake back from the US. I want to see more about Drake's American side. I'm not sure exactly what I am looking for with that, maybe a connection to another story such as a cousin or a friend who is either in an other story as a minor character or else who mentions something from another book (I'm thinking someone who mentions something It Lives In the Woods related, like how the friend's cousin goes to this school in Westchester and one of the senior class bullies got impaled in a tree and the basketball captain got mauled by a bear and . . . you know, just mentioning the events, not actually involved in them. There are way more people that go to that school than the ones we've seen).

Considering Olivia's stated heritage and the apparent fact that she seems to know about the time frame of The Crown & the Flame, I would love to see her talk more about that.

Or maybe see someone who has to be Lia's descendant just because of her coloring.

I want rumors that Dom and Sei's people still exist. Or better still I want to see someone with the brand. We don't ever need to see them in dragon form. I just want to see that they have that brand.

I want to know why the House Beaumont has all those weapons and what their connection is to the past. They have been there a very long time per their own claims. What's their story? Is there another name we should know them by?

Does Aurelia still exist? We could raid it for House Beaumont. ;) Solves all their money problems . . . especially if the city is abandoned but there are still riches there.

(Can you tell that I love The Crown & the Flame? It's not my favorite, but it's close.)

I want to see a resolution for Savannah and Bertrand, although I think that's probably coming soon.

I want the ability to go on a proper first date with Maxwell and not pay diamonds for it. I want it to be a situation of going on a date with your love interest at no real world cost, because it's near the end of the book (but not the series), so they are giving that to us. I don't want anyone to find out for a little bit, just because I think as long as they both decide to make the relationship happen, I think it would be cute to see them sneaking around for a little bit. And I want Bertrand to be the one to catch them. And I want him to have suspected something before there even was something and that was part of why he sold those pictures, because he thought his brother was just bringing home the girl he liked and now Bertrand likes her (but not in that way), too, so he just sighs and wishes them happy and tries to figure how to handle this finacially.

And I want them to be able to get the old Bertrand back, the one that was every bit as happy go lucky as Maxwell, the one he's been supressing because he thinks he has to be suber all the time or everything will fall apart. I want to see him happy. I want a house party at House Beaumont were Bertrand is hosting and he freaks everyone else because he's acting like his old self and no one knows what's going on except a very select few (maybe not even Maxwell, because I would love to see Maxwell's reaction to that).

I want the third book to let you pick your love interest and stick with just the one person so that you can do romantic events with them and not have the potential for multiple partners any more. I want their love interest to be acknowledged and I want the chance to set up the love interests they don't choose with other people. (Drake and Oliva amuses me . . . per the choice in the latest chapter, but I think Drake and Kiara might be what they are leaning toward in that and Olivia and Liam. Not sure on Hana, because even though she has two suitors . . . and I actually like both of them, one more than the other . . . she doesn't seem at all interested and there doesn't seem to be anyone else she's interested in, just you or no one).

I want Madeleine out. I just really, really want her out. Make Penelope queen if the MC decides on someone else and you don't want to go with Olivia (who clearly has feelings for Liam, so I think she is the most logical choice despite what Constantine thing), but get rid of Madeleine. (Yes, of course I don't mean you, but you know what I mean.)

Give us a real villain. Do not kill Bastien in the process. . . just because I had flashbacks of the beginning of The Crown & the Flame, Book 3 when I wrote that first sentence and he was the first person that fit that role I thought of. You (and this time I actually mean you) suggest that maybe this book could end with the enemies Constantine spoke of becoming an issue. I like that idea and would like to see that happen.

Give us more Leo. I realize that with his role in Rules of Engagement his situation is a little problematic, because they don't want to commit to an ending for that, so we can't have commentary on whether or not he has a wife and kids or not. . . or could they. I mean he could have married and no need to mention names. Either way, I'm sure there are ways to include him more without going into that. Have him come for a visit and let it turn into a multi chapter try to escape with their lives thing and have him comment that he has people who need him to get out of this alive without going into who. It doesn't even have to be family. It could be a friend or something. I also think there are ways to tie the code in, have the game ask if you want to pull data from ''Rules of Engagement: Newlyweds" if you've finished it. Then it would pull his name and whether or not he married your character from that and have comments appropriate that that. Not tons of extra dialogue, but little bits.

I'd like to see a situation where Maxwell has to save the day, bonus points if someone dismissed him as a threat because they only saw the surface of his personality. More bonus points if no new skills are revealed and he saves people with only whatever skills he has shown up until that point. I think he's shown plenty with potential. . . probably more in diamonds scenes which I haven't bought, because I am using what diamonds I can scrape up for other books.

I want Bastien's past to be very relevant in some way. I'm not sure how. As I also want his relationship with Drake to be mended, maybe Bastien is in a situation where he has to choose between duty and Drake, Savannah, or Bartie and he doesn't choose duty. And it doesn't go well, but ultimately works out.

I want being a media darling to have some more perks (apparently being a media darling will make you the apple queen without paying diamonds for a dress). Maybe it helps mitigate the situation with Tariq or the media saves you from someone if they like you enough (get in someone's way so that they can't catch you kind of save you, not step in front of a bullet for you kind of save you).

I want chase scenes where the outcome really does depend on you and you are the one being chased not the other way around. If you don't get caught you have to save someone with the help of someone else (I want it to be Maxwell) and if you do get caught, I want that someone (again, Maxwell, please) to save you and the other person by themselves.

As to how I want the series to end. . . I want to see Bertrand happy, as I stated above. I want Liam to have his queen and whether it's the MC or not, I want him to love her. This is another reason I want a third book to let you pick a love interest. It will give Liam a chance to fall in love with someone else if he isn't ending up with the MC. I want Bartie to be in a wedding. I want to see Penelope's poodles.

I think I'm going to stop there. That enough ideas for you to read through? Any of that sound like something you'd like to see, too? What would you like to see?