Talk:Witness: A Bodyguard Romance Choices/@comment-38015474-20200922185815/@comment-38015474-20200923184808

Welp, after reading the first 3 chapters I got to say that while I do like the fact that it's targeted for a more mature audience and I like that they're more descriptive with the sexual scenes and the tension, I don't like that the chapters are so short and filled with diamond choices at almost every turn. This reminds me of Chapters with all the diamond choices and I don't like that. The format for all the other stories is so much better than this. Hopefully this will be the only book where they do this. Although, some of the diamond choices were worth it because the dialogue and the writing was super hot, particularly in the first two chapters, but the diamond choices to either have waffles with him or be a total jerk and refuse the waffles is so dumb and unnecessary. Also, a lot of the regular choices are really bad and make the MC out to be a total biotch. I do like her confidence though and how she's not afraid to go after what she wants. So overall, I got mixed feelings about this so far.