Thread:Szmatan777/@comment-36836718-20190721174136/@comment-36836718-20191007165435

Most "newer" users tend to get confused about this since we don't have guidelines that go that much into detail. And we don't have guidelines since we haven't thoroughly discussed it... just pay attention that other users -who are usually not as familiar with the story as you are- are able to understand which pronoun refers to whom, then you should be good.

Also make sure that if you include something that the game states, that you label that as such. For example, if a character calls someone "dumb", then write something like "in chapter 1, character x calls character y 'dumb'". Otherwise people will think that you included your own opinion. At school, I sometimes forgot to do that and that cost me a few points.

So, in the text about Xanthe, make sure where the words shallow etc come from. If Antony himself uses the word, then put it into quotation marks and maybe include the chapter where he says this. Because otherwise people may think that you call her that and maybe stop reading because they expect a neutral Wikipedia-like text and not your opinion.

I hope I explained in a clear enough way? If not please ask ;) happy to help.