Thread:StoryGirl83/@comment-33814320-20180716065438/@comment-3452092-20180716154310

Ah! Then, I misunderstood what you meant. Sorry for the confusion. I will work on finishing my proposal for the walkthrough guidelines which I will then post in a blog post asking for feedback. I'll give you a link to the blog post when I do have it done, because I want as much feedback as possible.

As for what you did post, I really can't say a whole lot about it since I don't do much with those types of pages, but from what I saw combined with the little I do understand with those pages it looks pretty good.