Talk:Nightbound/@comment-38927972-20190714095206

An open letter to Pixilberry The problem with your stories is not in your covers, the problem in your stories Is not your lack of forcing us with creepy process of love interests looking at you Drake, Damien, Nik ect. But in the content of your stories and the quality of the writing so here are my sugestions for improvment. Of this story in particular 1. Stop forcing us with Nik yes i know he's the go to LI but he's forced down ouf throats to the point that i hate him. I am not "his to protect" 2. Make the Mc active and not a litteral Mac guffin mabe they get bitten by a werewolf mabe they save another character IDK but they have to be more than an object 3. CHANGE THE COVER BACK THERE WAS NO NEED FOR THE CHANGE IN THE FIRST PLACE!

So pixilberry those are my sugestions for a better Nightbound please take them into account and remember i am not angry i am just frustrated.

As a foot note as a way to imptove stories as a whole. 1. Take critism and take it well don't be a pri-madona and block people on twitter and activly look for it don't fish for complements maybe enlist fans to beta read for you or while the story is on going get fan opinion on it go to Redit or come here we are more harsh 2. Don't lie to the audience looking at you Payton Well that sums my feelings up thanks to everyone who read this far