User:The Jacked Maverick



I like comics (I wish I had Fistigons) and reading. I am an artist. Sci-Fi is great. I like to draw advanced technological things.

Complaints and "Suggestions" I have for the Great and Powerfull Studio of Pixelberry
Alphabetical.
 * ADAPT HOLLYWOOD U!
 * Make us play as a male...
 * …and make Ms. Sinclair a Love Interest!
 * Add more diversity. By diversity, I mean, racially and ethnically.
 * Continue The Crown and The Flame. There is so much potential! The mythology and the lore! Think of the lore!
 * Continue Endless Summer. (I'm sorry, but all those endings were awful. The Rourke one was the most hopeful, in my opinion)
 * Continue Hero.
 * Continue Most Wanted.
 * Don't ever give us another Home for the Holidays. In fact, fire the people who worked on it.
 * DO NOT REBOOT HIGH SCHOOL STORY!!!
 * Give us a better rewards system.
 * Make QUALITY books.
 * Make The Senior only have, like, six chapters.
 * No more emoji friendship system like in Endless Summer and America's Most Eligible Season 10. The one in It Lives In The Woods is slightly better as they still like you even though their status is low.

Home for the Holidays Review
(Check out my blog post!) https://choices-stories-you-play.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:The_Jacked_Maverick/Home_for_the_Holidays_Reveiw

Is Home for the Holidays the worst book ever made? No.

Is Home for the Holidays the best book ever made? ...yes! =D

I give Home for the Holidays 12 Christmas stars out of 7 minora candles! So go ahead and save up all your hard earned diamonds! Because this is the only book you need in your life.

Oh man, where to begin? Let's talk about the art. So many holiday symbolism! Every frame has decoration! Even after the holidays ended, we still have it! Appropriate when we are supposed to be celebrating Valentines Day! Gets us into that whole togetherness.

But you knew that already! Let us talk about the story.

Scarlett Joy can't wait to go home to celebrate. But her boss, the anti-holiday committee president, goes there to give her work. In a blessing (For the audience), his helicopter broke, so he can't fly away! Now your best friend, Unholly Night, wants you to take advantage of this opportunity to get her book published. You know, instead to go to the networks like a normal person. So Exciting! You also have to teach him the ways of being happy in December. Despite the fact that his mother died during the holidays. So reasonable and a great plan! I would TOTALLY do this in real life! And you should too!

There's this scene where the Anti-Holiday Committee President has to go back home after promising he would to take care of business, and the entire town gangs up on him! It didn't go on for to long. It is the perfect length. It really made me want to yell at him for leaving before finding happiness. "You keep sulking since day one? Aww... here, I can turn that frown upside down!"

Wyatt, who is the reverse, is Santa's very own assistant! He acts so happy and partyful! He acts like this for the entire book. Every piece of dialogue. It is just as funny the first time he does it as it is the 50th time. Never gets old. Never ever ever. I was so happy that it hurt.

And there is a subplot where your brother wants to be with a girl who has shown zero interest in him and ALWAYS goes back to her abusive boyfriend after each falling out. Now what would you do? How would you represent responsible big sisters everywhere? Come on, think of something wise and reasonable that anyone would do. That's right! =D Encourage him to keep perusing her even though she said no.

Now, one of my very, VERY few criticisms is that in the entire town, everyone was so jolly and generic. Why only the people in THAT town? They couldn't have spread their joy to other towns? With the many characters in this already, we should add more! Again, I'm just nitpicking.

Let's talk about the soundtrack. Amazing it was very relevant and would not lose meaning in the summer!

My biggest fear is that this book wouldn't end with a big dance party. Luckily, this book ends with a giant dance party!

Time for a Spoiler Alert. If you did not read it, stop reading this.

Still reading? Good.

There is no foursome between the Love Interests and me. Not even once. And there is so much sexual tension between Nick and I. Between Wyatt and me! Not even that, Holly wasn't even here since Chapter 2! Now, it didn't detract from me or my viewing experience. I will still keep it's perfect score. But I will say I got a little blue balled till the end. Especially with all the build up. Again, just nitpicking.

I get that many people don't have a high opinion for Home for the Holidays. But these critics and fans, they don't know what they are talking about! Home for the Holidays is an original masterpiece! I'm sick and tired of all these sequels that we keep getting. The Freshman 14? Endless Summer 3? Rules of Engagement 4? High School Story will get rebooted twice in the same year? No. Home for the Holidays ONE

I'm telling you, all these critics and fans are just losers with no social lives.

I'll try to fix it. This book is pretty much perfect. There is not a lot that CAN be fixed, but I'll try. One minor suggestions. Smooth out the very few wrinkles. Again, it's pretty much perfect, but lets begin.

Rip off MORE clichés. (I like that this film was a mesh of all the other holiday clichés. Makes it feel fresh. It worked out everywhere else, so of course it can work here. For example, a shakeup divides the characters. And a character has been lying to everyone about something, and everyone gets mad and dramatically walks away. Love when that happens! Or that someone's parent dies. I would say to make it end with a big dance party, but it already does it! Cool! Ahead of the curve. Everyone knows you can't end a book without a big dance party. To all you aspiring screen writers, can't think of an ending? Write, Every character dances to... I don't know, the Chainsmokers? Yeah... I don't know what music is.

Like I said before, it is perfect, but I just have a few nitpicks.

Sigh. All wonderful things must come to an end. So really, read this. Loads of fun and super realistic.

My Favorite Stories
1. Endless Summer (Rourke Ending)
 * Awesome cast.
 * Gorgeous visual effects.
 * Unique storytelling.

2. It Lives In The Woods (Sacrificed Mr. Marshall)
 * Great Location.
 * The Cast.
 * The really saved this book from being just okay.

3. Veil of Secrets
 * Good Mystery.
 * Great Lead.
 * Great Location.
 * The soundtrack is AMAZING!

4. The Crown and The Flame
 * Awesome Creatures and Mythology.
 * Epic World Building.
 * Strong Female Lead.

5. High School Story (Original Trilogy) (Band)
 * Good dynamic.
 * Great characters.
 * Light.

6. Most Wanted
 * Good Plot.
 * Terrifying Villain.
 * Terrifying Villain.

7. Hero (Friday Knight)
 * Aliens.
 * Crime.
 * Superpowers. Without all that CW stuff.

8. Rules of Engagement
 * It is international.
 * The family is just loveable.

9. The Freshman
 * Loveable characters.
 * Relatable scenarios.
 * The first three books were good.
 * But unfortunately, hurt it's reputation.

10. Red Carpet Diaries, Book 2
 * Pixelberry seems to know what they are doing this time.
 * Step up from Book 1.
 * There is an actual plot this time.

Honorable Mention: LoveHacks

My Love Interests for Each
Only the ones worth mentioning.
 * Quinn Kelly. (Very close between her and Ms. Montoya)
 * Maria Flores. (Winner by default. I am straight and I really ship Lemma.)
 * Stacy Green and Ava Cunningham. (I can't choose! They're both good!)
 * Sloane Washington. (She's so adorable! Yes, I chose her over my "perfect match.")
 * Eva (Minuet) (Again, by default)
 * Bianca (I want her on my side, and to sleep with her... not in that order.), Ivy (Nice and sweet), Lina (Wild Girl ;) I can't choose! Three way tie! I like all the women here! Except for Teagan and "Mackenzie".
 * Naomi Silverhawk. (''Once again, winner by default. The reason she is so low on this list is because I'm not feeling an intense reaction from her. Right now, she is only my LI just because she is the only girl there :-( )

My Name in Each
Alphabetical by last name.
 * Taylor. No Last Name.
 * Riley Brooks.
 * Jess "Clark".
 * Katie "Clark".
 * Nicole "Clark".
 * Hannah "Creed".
 * Dani "Donkey".
 * Devon "Frump".
 * Emily "Hall".
 * Jesse "John".
 * Scarlett Joy.
 * Jordan Lee.
 * Jessica Martins. (I know that is not her real last name)
 * Kai Park.
 * Alex "Reagan". (Friday Knight)
 * Alex "Sanchez". (That's right, I'm taking her name!)
 * Amy "Sedaris".
 * Mallory "Tate".
 * Violet "Tate". (''Originally named her "Pycckar," but simplified it to the default. X)
 * Jamie "Wendigo".

Last names in quotes are fan made, not real.

Ones I Don't Know How I Feel About
Alphabetical. All ranked at "Zero"
 * Bloodbound. Vampires aren't really my thing.
 * Perfect Match. (Joker, Black Haired Eastern Asian Girl. But I chose Ms. Washington, so it does it even matter?) Eh. It was okay, then the second half went in a totally different direction. It is the only one where I can be a male that I DON'T play.
 * The Haunting of Braidwood Manor. It's uh... you know... it's okay.
 * The Senior. This can be as bad as the previous two Hartfeld outings, or it can be like Arrow Season 5 and make a great comeback.

Opinions on the | Redesigned Characters

 * James Ashton (This one didn't really bother me as much. I got used to it pretty quickly! Good that Pixelberry was able to make it original. The Michael B. Jordan (I saw it) face really did throw me off.
 * Sebastian Delacroix (It really suits him more. Less smug. XD.)
 * Bill Holton (I... don't like it. The moustache seems... off to the rest of his white hair.)
 * Keo Parata (I like it. Not distinguishable from Mr. The Rock anymore.)
 * Evan Shipley (Barely noticed anything was different. I like it.)
 * Helen Twombly (I don't see the difference...)

People Who I Chose to Eliminate in America's Most Eligible Season 10 and Why
People I eliminated in bold.
 * Bianca and Teagan (Nothing personal. I just want someone like Bianca on my side, and in bed...not in that order.)
 * Ivy and Ryder (I know it hasn't happened yet, but I will save Ivy.)

People Who I Do NOT Ship Even Though Pixelberry Seems To Keep Pushing Them On Us For Diamonds Instead of Thinking Up of Better Material

 * Dave Reyes and Sam Massey (Not made for each other. Their encounters should be purely professional)
 * Dax Darcisse and Poppy Patel. (They have no chemistry.)
 * Lily Ortiz and Britney. (Britney is cruel.)
 * Quinn Kelly and Kele (Really, Pixelberry? REALLY?! If Quinn wasn't already my LI, this would be higher on this list. But her flirting with him makes me mad. "He's cute! Blah, blah." I had two hearts with her. AND STANDING RIGHT THERE NEXT TO HER!)
 * Avery and Dylan. (My brother deserves better.)
 * Frank Walter and Payton Saunders. (Not getting a strong vibe from them.)
 * Keo Parata and Brooke Williams. (...no comment. They just don't seem right.  Krooke)

People Who I Hate
''In no particular order. Just Alphabetical.''
 * Aunt. (Maniac who values $$$ more than family)
 * Beau Han and the rest of Alpha Theta Mu. (Sadists. If I were the MC, I would go all Rocky IV on their @$$. After Chapter 12, I won't go all Rocky IV on their @$$ anymore. Because Ivan Drago lives in the end.)
 * Brian Crandall.
 * Cody. (Physical Brute)
 * Hillary Clinton. (Crooked Hillary is as corrupt as they come.)
 * Kele. (*Shakes head while staring him down*)
 * Manny De La Cruz.
 * Marco Nevrakis. (Whiny Brat. Discount Joffrey Baratheon)
 * Morgan Jennings. (She's a b****)
 * Nathan Sterling. (Hope he gets bankrupted and beat up in prison)
 * Sereena Patel. (Rude)
 * Tommy Phelps. (Worthless piece of slime that abuses his power)
 * Zahra Namazi. (Mean)

People Who I Ship (They Don't Necessarily Have to Had a Romantic Relationship)
In No Particular Order
 * Abbie and Tyler. (Tabbie)
 * "Alex" and Elena Sanchez. (Sanchex or Salex)
 * Emma Hawkins and Luis Marino. (Lemma)
 * Dave Reyes and Alyssa Griffin. (Alive or Greyes)
 * Sam Massey and Ryan Summers (Ram or Summassey)
 * Dax Darcisse and Hazel. (Hax or Dazel)
 * Autumn Brooks and Julian Castillo. (Jautumn or Autian)
 * Sydney Kym and Mia Warren. (Sia. XD)
 * Kenna Rys and Dominic Hunter. (Kom or Den)
 * Kenna Rys and Raydan Lykel. (Kaydan)
 * Annelyse Adair and Whitlock. (Yes. Really. Annellock)
 * Scott "Lee" and Julia Mason. (Schoolia)

People Who I WANT as an LI
''In no particular order. Just Alphabetical.''
 * Alyssa Griffin. (Because I Can.)
 * Cassandra Leigh. (Nice Dress)
 * Kate O'Malley. (Old friend and nice.)
 * Michelle Nguyen. (She seems so down to earth.)
 * Myra Khandaar. (Adorable and similar to me.)
 * Payton Saunders. (She's so good looking and nice! DX)
 * Poppy Patel. (Nice Enough)
 * Scarlett Emerson. (Fiery)

Stories I Hate
(-5).Home for the Holidays
 * I'm sure you have all heard all the complaints on this site, so I'm not going to list them.
 * The only good things that came out of this were the diamonds and the comments section.

(-4). Red Carpet Diaries, Book 1 (The reason it is so high up is because on how OTHER people like it. Overrated.)
 * Pixelberry had no idea what they were doing, or what they WANTED to take this. (They didn't even make this a series until this book ended.)
 * TV-Y Hollywood.

(-3).The Royal Romance
 * Started off laughable.
 * Then it was mediocre.
 * Today, it's just... mildly interesting.

(-2).The Sophomore and The Junior
 * What is there left to say but that this franchise overstayed it's welcome?

(-1). America's Most Eligible Season 10 (Sweetheart)
 * Cringey.
 * So Bad, it's good.
 * That emoji system is stressful.
 * Unrealistic portrayal of "me."