Talk:The Royal Masquerade Choices/@comment-39023394-20200228044231

Ok, so I'm actually really disappointed with that ending. We spent the better part of this book fighting against all odds to become the queen, and then regardless of whether or not we marry Fabian our reign gets recorded in Cordonian history as his. We basically have no impact. Renza's death could have (and frankly should have) been more meaningful than it was. Her father trying to start a war over it was a perfect conflict and made so much sense. I think it would have been really interesting to take that and make a second book of MC trying to rule through the inevitable civil war. Instead we got two chapters of marrying a guy who just happens to be a Rhys, finding out that our birth wasn't special (even though it was implied many times that MC's origin would be notable), solving the impending war, and seeing the future of Cordonia get credited to a character we just met. This book was really enjoyable right up until the end where everything just felt rushed and really unsatisfying.