Talk:Across the Void/@comment-33990547-20181012114142

The book took a turn for the worse. I genuinely thought that the book would be overall amazing, but so far, only the soundtrack is its only redeeming quality.

Character-wise, they aren't doing so well. I mean, since when was the last chapter Titania even appeared? The siblings are too troublesome too, but not as characters, they're doing a great job at being annoying (which i hope is some sort of build up to the characters they will be in the next installment, if there will be any). The siblings seem to have taken over the book themselves, we barely get any screen time for our MC.

The plot is a big mess too. I cringed so hard at the summary of chapter 10. Throw an impromptu party? In the middle of a galactic war? Why not?

Personally though, I think they did a great job on the sibling drama, but it could change any moment. Don't make us side with either Eos or Pax PB, indecision is also a decision. Think of it, maybe the MC will be the key to finally finding peace between the two factions if they stay neutral throughout the book, which i believe, would make the book redeemable plot-wise.