Talk:Veil of Secrets/@comment-34296592-20180816083912/@comment-3452092-20180816163340

Yes, I've played Most Wanted, Book 1, more than once in the last three months in fact. I did not feel it was rushed (okay, maybe I thought chapter 14 and 15 were a little rushed, but other than that no), but at the same time, I also didn't have reason to believe that there would be more murders after chapter 12. . . that there was is not the point. They were unnamed characters we knew nothing about and their deaths honestly didn't impact us as much as a result. It was extremely glossed over and if they do that with Veil of Secrets, they will be doing their audience a disservice with the build up in the beginning.

And while I (mostly) didn't think it was rushed, I still feel like they dropped a lot of threads I want more on, such as wanting to meet more of Dave's foster siblings and feeling like Alyssa's role was built up to be more than it ultimately was (and yes, I did spend the 12 diamonds in chapter one to help her out, so I probably got to see everything there is to her roll in that book). I also wish we could have run into the survivor from chapter one, again, seen how he or she was doing after they'd had a little time to recover. I really want to know more about Ryan's son. There are just a lot of things that I feel like they left open (one of the many reasons I want a book 2) not counting the ending cliffhanger.