Thread:MondlichtPanda/@comment-3452092-20190714133009/@comment-37823074-20190716233055

Ho-kay, here goes.
 * splitting the Recycled Faces page seems like a very, very good idea, definitely
 * yes on the individual pages for Ellis Knight (though I'm not actively following the plot, he seems to have an important role), Mother of TE MC (whose name I'm blanking on right now, I'm sorry!) and Harry
 * I have no memory of reading about Kamilah's brother or brothers, so no clue on my part :/
 * adding images to appearances on the Order of Dawn page sounds like a good idea to me, so yup on that from me
 * tenses: I'd prefer present tense, except when it makes sense to change it up and live a little (tl;dr: what Jade said! ;))
 * NB cover: keeping both cover in tabs sounds good
 * The Royal Heir as series in infobox: that would definitely make sense, so yup

Andisimon wrote: Mondlichtpanda, could you please post your suggestion for Writers at Pixelberry again? My notes are at work (I'm a bloody genius today, seriously) but I found the post from the other thread.

MondlichtPanda wrote: Ah, okay, so that's more of a fact-finding claim than a copy/paste thing. A mention in introduction should do for this, then. MondlichtPanda wrote: [...]Here's an example of what I meant for the Writers at Pixelberry page for the credit:

Get to know the people behind the words, plotting the twists and turns of many a Choices' book. Thanks to Tumblr user cloudywithachanceofdiscourse for compiling parts of the info used on this page.

You could take out the first sentence and just leave the credit mention, either at the top or bottom, too. At least I think that's what you're referring to.

As for Ahmed... I'm still zero on the Benfica mention. In the gallery on his page there's that one pic that links the username of a follower to the trivia bullet point of him playing for said team, but for the life of me I've yet to encounter any in-game mention/confirmation/what have you. There's only the Dragons. (And personally I never even thought he played for Benfica until I read that on his page and was like *scratches head* huh? I kinda assumed from the get-go anyway that PB would pick a fictional club for him just because that's way easier.)

Discussions is being behaving more or less like it should, but then I barely had time today for anything at all. Thanks work!

Man, I hope I got... well, if not everything at least most of it. If I missed something, *offers plate of cookies* ...Distraction, you say? Nah, I don't know what you're--Uh... look over there! A giant, flying lizard! *hides*

(Long post is soooo long, I'm so sorry.)