Thread:MondlichtPanda/@comment-3452092-20190714133009/@comment-36836718-20190722124933

In case you want to have something to do but don't know what, you can help fixing some grammar. It's almost unbelievable how much odd grammar is on some pages that apparently no one ever reads...

1. instead of creating a new sentence, people just combined sentences by commas, like:

" Later in the night, Kenna and her army march towards Aurelia, there, Annelyse leads them in a secret mining tunnel below the city, that should bring them to the city's garden, after a while, they get out from the tunnel and into the city, they stealthy kill a few guards and go to the city's banquet hall, where Marco and his men are, they try to take Marco by surprise, but Marco's bodyguard, Helene, immediately notices them, and a fight ensues, while Kenna's men battle Marco's, Kenna duels with Marco, she gets the upper hand and almost kills him, but before she can, Helene saves him and takes him away, nonetheless, Kenna manages to liberate Aurelia from the Nevrakis occupation."

or 2. combined them, capitalized a preposition and then made a half sentence like:

"Right after Queen Adriana Rys makes a toast in order to officially seal the alliance of The Five Kingdoms, King Luther Nevrakis and his son Marco reveal their true colors and signal a group of Nevrakis soldiers to enter the Great Hall, the soldiers slaughter all the nobles they can find, Including the Queen, except for Princess Kenna Rys, her bodyguard Gabriel Amarne and Dominic Hunter. Who barely escape with their lives."

or 3. randomly jump tenses several times between a sentence,

4. wrote things like "a temple ran by monks" instead of "temple run by monks" (which makes me only think of running temples...)

and those aren't even the weirdest cases of odd grammar I came across today....