Talk:It Lives Beneath Choices/@comment-36630098-20181220075754

One thing that bothered me about this chapter is that I spent the diamonds for the bracelet that glows when there’s danger. I’m surprised that it didn’t light up to warn my MC about the danger that was coming on the boat. Unless the boat in today’s chapter is part of the danger from the previous chapter. I get that today’s chapter was part of the story line but it still could have been worked in such as when it was time for the ritual.