Thread:MondlichtPanda/@comment-37484301-20200411232318/@comment-37915141-20200623221050

Jadelady wrote: I like the +Jax  better since most achievements are italicized anyways. Done.

Jadelady wrote: Do you think we should link up back to the chapter 1 explanation? like link even though it feels redundant but for the users who skip the intro and then get confused when they are looking at a later chapter's guide?

Linking doesn't work properly on mobile unless all the sections are expanded (which is also excellent news for the BOLAS walkthrough). And if we're gonna link we should probably link to the Ch15 explanation because that's the one that'll have the exact numbers if people wanted to count. But I don't think it's that important here. Maybe if we get confused comments we can try linking?

Jadelady wrote: From Chapter 1 through Chapter 14, if Jax accumulated 3 or more points than Lily, Lily is sacrificed. If Lily accumulated 2 or more points than Jax, Jax is sacrificed. If Jax has less than 3 points in his favor or Lily has less than 2 points in her favor, Choices 5 and 6 are the last choices that determine who is sacrificed. Kissing or hugging Adrian or Kamilah will result in Jax's sacrifice if he is equal to or has less points than Lily. If he has more points than Lily, Lily will be sacrificed. If they have equal points and you kiss or hug Jax, Lily will die. If you kiss or hug Lily, Jax will die. If Lily has 1 more point than Jax and you kiss Jax, Lily dies. If you hug Jax, Jax dies. If Jax has 1 more point than Lily and you kiss or hug Lily, Jax dies. If Jax has 2 more points than Lily and you kiss Lily, Jax dies. If you hug Lily, Lily dies.

It may just be me that I understand it far better in my list, like this is a looooooooot to read for me when in the list I see it immediately (although I also understand things better in bullet-point format and always disliked putting such things into long paragraphs which is not professional I think).

I would maybe move it around so all the Jax stuff is right next to each other, and then the Lily stuff. But maybe you're right and people will first look at what happens if they try talking to their own LI and not at how many Jax/Lily points they have. If that was your line of thinking.

But you can leave it like this too, maybe break the first paragraph into 3 lines? I don't know man, not sure what's the etiquette here to begin with. I would write it exactly how I wrote in the draft, like a list (maybe reword the parts about the point differences and find a nice looking arrow emoji to better distinguish) so I'll just leave it to you guys to decide how it should really be done.