Talk:Witness: A Bodyguard Romance/@comment-34483549-20200525201341/@comment-37915141-20200525204108

TRM had 2 LIs, Hunter (king/queen-regent) and Kayden (crown shield). We just had to choose a primary one early on but the other one was still there and even had some scenes. Meanwhile Witness barely has any characters beside MC and Cassian...

Anyway, I agree. The ridiculous diamond system tanked the book for me already. I don't think there's even much to unearth with those scenes, we had maybe 2 or 3 that dealt with Cassian's past, the other ones are just being nice and sensible or steamy. And they're fueling the fire with this poor plot development if it can even be called development. At least, it's incredibly slow for 12 chapters. Most books are nearly reaching their peak by this time while Witness barely had anything happen besides hooking up at any place possible. Even though I don't like this kinda smut I understand wanting to experiment but I think they messed this up gloriously.