Talk:The Junior, Book 1/@comment-34296592-20180626121709

I wrote this in a discussion post, but I think I should write it here as well...

The Junior has been a mess. The most part of the book had all these boring chapters where nothing really happens, and the part where we're actually starting to fight back is rushed at the very end. I think it would make much more sense if Pixelberry gave us a few chapters where Tyler tried to prove himself to his friends, and gradually got their respect back. Furthermore, these chapters could have the friends making a real plan on how to bring the Alphas down. Because right now, it feels like they are going to rush to the war zone without proper "weapons." The Alphas have proven themselves to be really dangerous, and the original characters are just running there without experience?