Talk:Red Carpet Diaries, Book 2/@comment-26069469-20180922043406/@comment-36063807-20180923044448

IMO, the story is just trying to do way too much. Like you said they simply had too much going on. Are they focusing on the sexual assault case aspect, Seth and Tejas disharmony between their collaboration, Thomas Hunt's movie, Tommy Phelps movie, the MC's image being out of her control, or something else altogether? It feels like they had too much to give and had litle idea on how to piece it together. I mean it goes all over the place.