Talk:Home for the Holidays/@comment-33719824-20180118212254/@comment-34138917-20180126001737

@RayleeR.N.

Blech, this MC is obnoxious! She's just so...happy! It's pretty obvious Nick doesn't want to go out and do stuff, so just leave the poor guy alone! The only real conflict in this book is how MC wants to convince Nick to read Holly's manuscript.

Yes, that's it. That's the conflict.

TC&TF: You need to fight for your life and reclaim your kingdom.

The Freshman: You need to successfully hold down a rigorous internship for a tough-as-nails professor/famous author all while serving as material for the book he's writing to remain in school.

Most Wanted: You need to track down and stop a dangerous serial killer before he hurts or kills anyone else.

Home for the Holidays: You need to get your cranky boss to read your friend's manuscript.

I mean, wow. That's incredibly underwhelming. The story is far too sugar puffs and candy apples for my taste, it's simply too happy. And I really hate to mention it again, but the fact that it's a holiday story a full month after the holidays have ended is just stupid. It would have been better if it had been released in November and ended in mid to late December instead of January/February, when the holidays are all wrapped up.