Talk:The Nanny Affair, Book 1 Choices/@comment-39009747-20200527183257

MC just constantly has oddly horny descriptions of Sophia even when its just unnecessary, like...she "looks tired and disheveled...yet still sexy" ? I just skip those, literally not interested.

Would be better if it was a slow burn, something that feels genuine instead of a constant flood of repressed teen hormones.

There are fanfiction writers that write better for free than whoever is paid to write out their quick boss-affair fantasies.