Thread:MondlichtPanda/@comment-37484301-20200411232318/@comment-37484301-20200623164925

8emi95 wrote: Jadelady wrote:

That's an idea! We could do that. Okay. I'm more of a fan of how I put +Jax and +Lily but that might be confusing and people might ask when did such effects appears so here's what I was thinking. This is just a draft, feel free to correct the grammar or anything. I'm not sure about where the general explanation should go and how to format it so I just put it there. I think the note explaining the Ch15 choices influence should remain there, even though it's rather lengthy.

Also, while we're at my blog posts. I don't remember what we agreed on when we were talking about including the skills for the max XP in BOLAS. This was my draft. Andisimon and I also talked about there being other paths that gets you to unlock all skills but there could be several so I'm not sure how and where we should include them if we want to (I also didn't check the different combinations because there are a ton of them).

I put this on the top of Chapter 1: https://choices-stories-you-play.fandom.com/wiki/Bloodbound,_Book_3_Choices#Chapter_One:_The_Hunger_Choices we can reword it if you think it would be better? I'm up to Chapter 13 in updating the choices (I kept it as +Lily and +Jax) if you want to take a look at what I've done if you think it's confusing. I kind of wish there was a way to use red or different color font to differentiate the notes. :)

I'm stopping on the updating (since I've gotta go work) so if it's decided in a few hours, I can work on it again on my lunch break or you can take over? :)