Thread:MondlichtPanda/@comment-3452092-20190714133009/@comment-38452727-20190715123341

Andisimon wrote:

Pages where we/I noticed something's off I changed the wording on Gloria's page and I finally added Serafine's notes to her page and to The Order of the Dawn.
 * Gloria (odd grammar)
 * Addison Sinclair (lack of content and odd grammar)
 * info about number of Kamilah Sayeed's brothers may lead to redundant trivia point
 * Writers at Pixelberry
 * Ahmed Khabbaz and Benfica/Dragons and "his plays" (odd content and grammar)
 * The Order of the Dawn... page has structural problems
 * figuring out how to call Serafine Dupont's power of accessing MC's memories