Talk:Bloodbound, Book 2 Choices/@comment-37953476-20190601084818

As I usually don't complain about lazy/bad writing, but this chapter with the trackers? whyyyy? ;-(-( it was so obvious, why do they make these super powerful vamps that rule NYC look so stupid? it makes absolute not sense (they force them to visit the collection, force them to wear a device and they follow through even if the MC and others suspect smth?). I mean it would be really easy to write the same result with much smoother plot (like million possible ways), but this one is really painful