Talk:Nightbound Theory Page/@comment-36744766-20190806042324/@comment-36836718-20190806065339

The main faults I could identify were
 * too much world-building with the introduction of too many species at once
 * this led to too much hopping from one place to the next. Two chapters here, one chapter there, three chapters somewhere completely else,...
 * MC. Almost everyone complained about the MC being "dumbed down" and too inactive in the meaning of "hides in a corner any time something happens" (especially if you don't spend diamonds)