Thread:MondlichtPanda/@comment-37484301-20190513200935/@comment-36836718-20190518132247

https://choices-stories-you-play.fandom.com/wiki/Lester_Castellanos?diff=206851&oldid=206537

Somehow I feel the whole sentence is wrong. It sounds more judgmental (not saying it's wrong but maybe it can be based more on something that is said?) and the second part lacks a subject?