Talk:Teppei Kaneko/@comment-36277500-20190510230034/@comment-37484301-20190511011809

I do not know who made the trivia point, but (my two cents) I would let you change it. If you know the language (in this case, Japanese) or if it is also can be found in other Asian languages, I would say you could update or edit the trivia point and correct it. As for Open Heart, the general info I assume was taken from the chapter, right? Where PB glosses over medical information (diagnosis, treatment, procedures, etc)? I think she was worried how the layman / common person with no medical or scientific background / knowledge would understand it if you used more information. In other words, if you could dumb it down for those of us who aren't as knowledgeable, that would be great. I am not saying this to be mean...but in my personal experience, I think I'm average or have common sense that everyone has and it takes my friends and coworkers to tell me that I'm smarter than I give myself credit for and my logic isn't "common sense" to others so I have to dumb it down or phrase it a different way for them to understand. I don't know what the players/readers demographics are, I think you have to be 18 years old to contribute to the wiki, but if you think about if a high school student or graduate can understand what you're writing, then what you write is acceptable. I hope I phrased this correctly, and I hope I didn't overstep.