User blog comment:HersheysAlmonds/FanFic Choices/@comment-35562984-20180916162101/@comment-34589382-20180916183935

I think it is good and it servers well the purpose of the story you wrote. For me I write deep complex yet easy to understand characters, since I write mostly crime fictions, I do love those. The most important character for me is the antagonist; He can be someone who is close to the MC and is loved by any one, even the reader, and later he rveals himself. Also, I like to make my characters realistic and believable and each one can reflect a different persona. Now I am starting to write a fiction about madness and multi-persona problem, and I am digging a lot of Psychologie.