Talk:Open Heart, Book 1 Choices/@comment-39207187-20190525225555/@comment-39384181-20190529215818

I completely agree with you Ferrynheit17. That was a mess of a mess with Ethan. I would have thought him to be more tender and not face first into my nethers. Ethan is written as smart and nonchalant about his sexiness. Their were tender moments between the two that would have translated well in this chapter. And there as so many more adjectives in the english language that seems to never be used. Also, "Mmmmmmm???" I had to have my character storm out on him to avoid that mess in further chapters. And heck, complain because there were no real CHOICES that could have made that better.

I let Naveen leave considering we had exhausted all attempts at that point. He shouldn't have to be cooped up in that room if he could be spending time enjoying the rest of his life. Considering how many people that have died in this book I was not certain of his outcome.