Thread:MondlichtPanda/@comment-37484301-20190409040551/@comment-36836718-20190409165423

I just stumbled over this long paragraph from RoE misc characters page about Captain John.

Although not much is known about him, he appears in all three books that take place on the cruise and plays a part in some major events of the story. Among them Jess being put in the position where she quits her job at Nomade so that Blake can keep his job rather than have Blake and Jess relationship looked at too closely when Mallory points out that Blake is showing too much favor to her. The favor is earned, but if John looked too closely, he would likely discover things they didn't want him to know and Blake would be fired.

Even I who have recently played the book have to read the text several times and still don't understand what that that paragraph is supposed to say... any ideas? Should we try to rewrite it so it's understandable?