Thread:Fearless Diva/@comment-25828160-20180202060553/@comment-4786757-20180203010709

Gogobell wrote: Here we go again...here are a couple of the errors on Endless Summer, Book 2.

- Instead of, "''It succeeds the first book, Endless Summer, Book 1. It is followed by Endless Summer, Book 3." I've transitioned it to, "It succeeds the first book, Endless Summer, Book 1, and is followed by Endless Summer, Book 3.''" Same transition I've been using on all book pages.

- The Dating headline shouldn't be here...this should be put in Gameplay Features, not right under Summary.

- Dating has to be rephrased, re-organized, and cleaned to be much shorter, classier, and more appealing to see.

- Chapters' plots are to be deleted. Only official summaries should be kept.

- You should have a link to your character.

- Watchers should be linked to Vaanti.

- Watcher queen should be linked to Ximaedra.

- Sharktooth Isle should be linked to La Huerta - Sharktooth Isle

- Quinn should be linked in Chapter 7

- One in "one of your friends" should be linked to Lila.

- Gameplay features also need to be shortened, headlines should get a semi-colon, and the gameplay features should also be rephrased, re-organized, and cleaned for a brighter appeal.

- Unanswered questions should be taken off. Unecessary now.

- Satellite system has been moved to La Huerta, shouldn't be on this page.

- Trivia of course is to be rephrased in the exact same terms, and punctuation as the other book pages. Chapter to ''Chapter. ''Unecessary trivia to be removed. Links like "Most Wanted" instead of just Most Wanted....etc....etc....etc...

- References should be...oh wait, no, for once those are good.

- BOOKS TEMPLATE SHOULD BE ADDED, that is SUPER IMPORTANT for navigation.

Yeah, that summarizes my 1st reading.