Talk:Queen B, Book 1/@comment-44952935-20200710173656

I feel harsh because we're only four chapters in but I'm personally a bit disappointed with this story... Don't get me wrong, I like it enough to read it casually. It's just I've seen the 'Take down the popular girl' or 'Not like other girls' plot so many times it feels overdone. To be completely honest I thought this was gonna be like the Hollywood U for High School Story and that put my expectations up pretty high since I enjoyed playing that game back in middle school.

The plot with the Professor and the MC bothers me. It started off with some potential but now it feels forced. It's like the MC is desperately trying to get to the professor despite the professor wanting to stay professional. I find some of the dialogue completely annoying and I think the MC can be mean at times despite some of the choices you pick. This one is just my personal gripe about this app overall. I'm really tired of seeing that same curly bun hairstyle and I wish there were more darker color hairstyles.

I like the popularity mechanic and I'm glad they're improving it each time they use it. especially after Platinum, Passport to romance, and AME.

Overall this book has the potential to be a really good story and hopes it gets better throughout.