Thread:NeryNight/@comment-3452092-20180418015626/@comment-3452092-20180517222738

I've barely even had time to play the game in the last few weeks, but I have looked at some of the updates to the guides and this is my thoughts on it using the example you provided.

Following an option in a choice:
 * Text of option here. (Back Off. You're just here for first aid, okay?)

Or:
 * Text of option here. (Back Off - You're just here for first aid, okay?)

Although I'm not a great fan of the use of the colon, it probably is valid grammatically, but if we used it, it should be more like this:
 * Text of option here. (Back Off: You're just here for first aid, okay?)

Whichever one we use for the choices, should be matched (with italics instead of normal text) by the version that goes between choices, so they would look like the following three formats.

''Back Off. You're just here for first aid, okay?''

Back Off - You're just here for first aid, okay?

Back Off: You're just here for first aid, okay?

If we do this with the full text, then only the text of the achievement should be there with any additional comments or instructions on a separate line entirely.

What are your thoughts on this?