Thread:NeryNight/@comment-3452092-20180418015626/@comment-3452092-20180518024236

There is no consensus on that and as far as I know nothing on this topic has been run by either of that admins (I usually go to Fearless Diva, because she's around more and I've been in contact with her a lot). After actually looking at them, I think I like the dash best, too.

Actually, I was asking your thought on the whole of what I said, but you've already commented on most of it. I still stand by saying that it takes a lot of space when an achievement is next to a choice, but I'm not sure how how else to handle it. Clearly there are people going to the trouble to get the entire text of the achievements and I don't want to belittle their efforts, but I'm not sure how to handle keeping that part taking up a reasonable amount of space and still using what they have added. I mean unless we did something like this (example from chapter 9 of The Royal Romance, Book 3):

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Diamond Choice 5 (Hana)
 * Distract Hana with kisses. (Frisky Business * )
 * Disengage (En Garde * )

 * Your sparring match with Hana took a steamy turn  * You practiced self-defense with Hana!

''And after that put any additional notes that might be relevant to anything. That way, they are separate, but don't take up so much space, cluttering up the actual choices.''

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It would take a lot of formatting to do that, though. Do you think that could work. . . or do you have another idea on how to handle this, because I am open to suggestions. Whatever we come up with, I will show it to Fearless Diva and see what she thinks. Most of the time she is good with whatever I suggest, but I do try to present additional views to her so she has the full picture and can make an informed decision, and of course she can do her own research.