Talk:Passport to Romance/@comment-34138917-20190405215440/@comment-34138917-20190407022228

After looking at some of the Tumblr posts of PTR, I've been even more discouraged. This book feels really sloppily thrown together as kind of a "we need a new book to rake in diamonds" kind of deal. Stereotypical, uninteresting love interests like the party girl, introvert, sports hero, and wealthy man with a mysterious background. The plot is incredibly generic and I swear it's been used before...I just don't know where. It feels sort of like RoE, but instead of the main focus being completing inheritance tasks, the main focus is to vlog about places in the world that have been vlogged about by millions of people already.

Plus, adding on to the sloppily thrown together bit, Ahmed. He's Muslim and says he doesn't drink alcohol because of that. Yet, in a recent chapter, he drinks champagne in a diamond scene and talks about drinking beer with his friends. I get that Pixelberry made a mistake and they're fixing it, but...really? How do you forget something that you made a point to bring to attention in a chapter that aired like one or two chapters before?