Thread:Fearless Diva/@comment-25828160-20180202060553/@comment-25828160-20180202215310

What's wrong with the Endless Summer 1 page ? I'll list to you all the errors I see in one reading:

- Endless Summer series should be Endless Summer series (of course with the link).

- The small summary underneath the intro shouldn't be here. There's many other opportunities to put that elsewhere. It's in the guidelines of the One-Liner or Two-Liner introduction.

- It should be "Fully Released" in the template, not Wednesday.

- The first mention of "you" in the summary should have a link to your character.

- Diego, Jake, Quinn, Lila and Aleister's mentions in Chapter 3 should have links.

- The link of "ferocious beast" should be T'Kal and not the redirect "Sabertooth" cause or else, when you click on it, on the T'Kal page, there will be a little "Redirect by Sabertooth" written. We want to avoid that.

- Sean's mention isn't linked in Chapter 6.

- Raj's mention isn't linked in Chapter 7.

- Sean's mention is linked later on....it's the first mention of the character that should be linked.

- The words "Sea monster" should be linked to Cetus.

- Watchers should be linked to Vaanti.

- Don't get me started on Gameplay Features, there are a lot of errors. Chapters should be Chapters. Choices shouldn't be written in italic. There's many many many rephrasing needing.

- Unanswered questions are to be deleted.

- 90% of the trivia is to be reformatted in the exact same phrases I used in other book pages.

- Soundtracks should be deleted, and a link to go visit the Soundtracks on their main page should be linked (just like on all other book pages).

- The Reference heading should be "References" instead, even if there's only one reference.

So yeah...that summarizes it. And that's only my first reading, I usually do three. That is what's wrong with the Endless Summer pages, and that's only BOOK 1. It gets worse... ;)

At least you can get an idea of what I'm editing...and how I'm working on other pages.

UPDATE: Also..."resort" needed a link to "The Celestial".