Thread:Circy/@comment-38452727-20190906174351/@comment-38452727-20190906191901

Thanks a lot for adding the whole chapter! However there are some things I noted seeing your edits that need improving, not to reprimand you but to make you improve, I know you don't know everything: I hope I didn't come off as rude and you read it as I meant it. Have a good night!
 * We usually write "No effect" instead of "no effect".
 * We write the options as they are shown in-game, so if they end with a period, the options in the walkthrough should too.
 * You should move the walkthrough template to the bottom of the page, you left it at the top of the chapter.