Thread:MondlichtPanda/@comment-37484301-20190513200935/@comment-36836718-20190518095935

I noticed that in some sections, there are long paragraphs only separated by a br but I think inserting a free line works much better. Reason: oftentimes the previous sentences are so long that you don't see that a new paragraph starts, especially in mobile version which has a different length of line. I hope you agree with me that a free line in those cases work better? Or is this something that should be discussed?

On the other hand, I think Bryce has too many free lines, it's currently one paragraph per sentence. Is there something we can add? I wouldn't want to remove them because Diva added them but so short paragraphs look odd to me. But that's probably because of my university background where professors mark such things as attempt to fill a page with filler instead of content.

And ILITW MC is referred to as Your Character on the walkthrough in italics. Shouldn't it either be Main Character or Devon?