Thread:MondlichtPanda/@comment-37484301-20190728181311/@comment-38452727-20190728195351

Andisimon wrote: Glad you like the title :)

Can any of you help this user with grammar? A comma is needed but I don't know if the rest is okay. [//choices-stories-you-play.fandom.com/wiki/Rheya?diff=238216&oldid=238208 https://choices-stories-you-play.fandom.com/wiki/Rheya?diff=238216&oldid=238208]

Oh and Adrian said Vlad was around in the 1500s. He didn't say when exactly. Can we put 400+ years as his age? Or was there another indication in a different scene? I changed it a bit. Have a look: https://choices-stories-you-play.fandom.com/wiki/Rheya?diff=next&oldid=238218

And I think just 400+ years will do.