Thread:StoryGirl83/@comment-36836718-20190305080600/@comment-37484301-20190526044826

If I am understanding Mar correctly, this is what she suggests:


 * remove flashback/vision/memory altogether. If the character physically appears no matter the context, the chapter is listed with no description. (e.g. Chapter 1)


 * if the character physically appears no matter your actions, the Chapter is listed with no description (e.g. Chapter 1)


 * if the character is present but not seen and not mentioned, they are listed as "off-screen". (e.g. Chapter 2 (off-screen; determinant).) Example would be Amy and Hayley walking into the hall as MC tries to sneak Atlas out. We don't know the upperclassmen are Amy and Hayley unless we fail to hide Atlas behind the sentry.  This also makes their presence "determinant" on your choices. Maggie is also offscreen but her presence in the diamond-free route bumps her up from off-screen; determinant to regular physical appearance.


 * if the character is mentioned by another character but not seen, they are listed as "mentioned". If you all want to put letters, texts, etc under this heading, we could do that... otherwise...


 * letter / text / etc can remain separate or be grouped under "letter"?