Talk:Home for the Holidays/@comment-33649957-20180128191007

What a silly story! Its sweet but annoying too. First off, I personally feel very dumb for making the successful businessman Nick read and publish some mediocre love story from an amateur writer/childhood friend. Why on Eart does MC even have a right to feel angry at Nick for not wanting to read and publish it? Then, the dialogues are plane silly, the whole family is just jolly all the time about everything. PB makes us wait 7 chapters to finally kiss the LI (and it did not seem like he fully enjoyed the moment. More like felt onliged to do so and maybe felt a bit lonely (being stuck in this small town)). Whatsmore, making Holly (the childhood friend) a LI is kinda weird...