Thread:MondlichtPanda/@comment-37484301-20190604134125/@comment-4786757-20190606164726

Jadelady wrote: Andisimon wrote:

Fearless Diva wrote: [//choices-stories-you-play.fandom.com/wiki/Bestiary?action=history https://choices-stories-you-play.fandom.com/wiki/Bestiary?action=history]

^^^ It sounds a bit too repetitive with the "Acording to..." but anways, can you make sure, for each time we learn new pieces of info for these creatures, we  put down  which chapter and book if need be it was  in? I hope it's a little better now? [//choices-stories-you-play.fandom.com/wiki/Bestiary?diff=215595&oldid=215561 https://choices-stories-you-play.fandom.com/wiki/Bestiary?diff=215595&oldid=215561] Sorry about that, had a lot of information from Chapter 8 to add and wasn't sure if I should put who said what. I'll add references(?) to put where each bit of info comes from after work (unless someone else does it before me) All good! I just think we need more variety. Maybe instead of so much "According to..." you could leave one of those in there, but the other times, you could say "While at the.. X mentions that..." the place where it was said if different and the person. But if u can't, I don't mind the repetiveness... just make sure to mention which chapters you get the information in so we can see the progression.