Thread:Fearless Diva/@comment-25828160-20180202060553/@comment-25828160-20180202215310

What's wrong with the Endless Summer 1 page ? I'll list to you all the errors I see in one reading:

- Endless Summer series should be Endless Summer series (of course with the link).

- The small summary underneath the intro shouldn't be here. There's many other opportunities to put that elsewhere. It's in the guidelines of the One-Liner or Two-Liner introduction.

- It should be "Fully Released" in the template, not Wednesday.

- The first mention of "you" in the summary should have a link to your character.

- Diego, Jake, Quinn, Lila and Aleister's mentions in Chapter 3 should have links.

- The link of "ferocious beast" should be T'Kal and not the redirect "Sabertooth" cause or else, when you click on it, on the T'Kal page, there will be a little "Redirect by Sabertooth" written. We want to avoid that.

- Sean's mention isn't linked in Chapter 6.

- Raj's mention isn't linked in Chapter 7.

- Sean's mention is linked later on....it's the first mention of the character that should be linked.

- The words "Sea monster" should be linked to Cetus.

- Watchers should be linked to Vaanti.

- Don't get me started on Gameplay Features, there are a lot of errors. Chapters should be Chapters. Choices shouldn't be written in italic. There's many many many rephrasing needing.

- Unanswered questions are to be deleted.

- 90% of the trivia is to be reformatted in the exact same phrases I used in other book pages.

- Soundtracks should be deleted, and a link to go visit the Soundtracks on their main page should be linked (just like on all other book pages).

- The Reference heading should be "References" instead, even if there's only one reference.

So yeah...that summarizes it. That is what's wrong with the Endless Summer pages, and that's only Book 1. It gets worse... ;)

At least you can get an idea of what I'm editing...and how I'm working on other pages.