Talk:Across the Void/@comment-37705512-20190401144125

Im still unimpressed by this book. I gave this a second chance during hiatus. When they came back, no change, same old routine. A good book with a brillaint concept, but that potential has become the downfall of this book. I just dont know anymore....

This is why I never like this book anymore:

1. Very short chapters, especially the chapters are more focused on the siblings rather than the main character.

2. Too much romance, for the 3 siblings, the plot is full of various events and unncessary stories that can cause the loss of the main plot. What I want to focus on this book is the PLOT. PLOT is very important in every story, and try to lessen the romance.

3. Very demanding book, some of the choices are useless and no sense at all. Make choices that are helpful to the plot. Majority of the choices are related to romance.

I might this book one last chance, if they're able to fix with so many issues.