User blog:General Khor/2021 In Review

"Another year gone."

- Professor Dumbledore, Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone

Hello and welcome to another semi-annual review blog by General Khor. As 2021 draws to a close, it's time to review what Choices has gone through throughout the year. And yes, as usual, I have more books to cover in this blog, not including Open Heart, which I did a review on earlier, and I forgot to mention it's suitable for intermediates, as some scenes and topics in that series can be... distressing. Anyway, let's get into it.

State of Choices, 2021 2nd Half
As of now, the Covid-19 pandemic is still raging on, especially due to the dangerous Delta and the newest Omicron variants, so releases are still at the rate of one book per month, though if you're a non-VIP player, the rate would be less than that. Why? If you've noticed, this March and November saw no non-VIP releases at all, so there are only 10 books released this year. To add salt to the wound, starting from the last third of this year, all new series will go through a VIP phase before being released to everyone mid-season. Needless to say, many players are miffed about this, because not only do non-VIP players have to wait 2 to 3 weeks or so for the fun to be given to them (unfortunately, this also includes the long-awaited Greatest Mystery Ever, which of course is not the actual title, I'll reveal it when the general release comes), this also raises some questions:


 * 1) Since all previous VIP books are standalones, will all upcoming series be solo books as well? If so, that means Laws of Attraction, the last new series released before the new VIP plan went into effect, will be the last series in Choices.
 * 2) If the new series under the VIP 2.0 plan do get serialised, will sequels for those go through the VIP phase as well? I mean, I know for sure sequels for pre-VIP series won't have a VIP phase, and so far, one of the newest series is confirmed to be a solo book, and there are still 3 books ongoing under the new plan. If any of those get serialised, I sure hope there won't be a VIP phase for those sequels.

Now let's talk about the recent developments for the past half year. So, AVSP and TUH are finished, The Nanny Affair has wrapped up its 2nd season and is confirmed to be a trilogy, Laws of Attraction is confirmed to be a series, Queen B Season 2, and maybe the series as a whole, is ending soon, and most importantly, The Royal Grand Finale aired in November, thus closing the doors on the longest franchise in Choices. Needless to say, in light of this, I'll be starting The Royal Franchise in the near future. In fact, I've finished Rules of Engagement in preparation for that. I mean, when you've played The Crown & the Flame, you might want to play The Royal Masquerade, RoE and The Royal Franchise as well, it's kind of a king-sized package. Also, for a Halloween treat, most of us got Wolf Bride, one of the original VIP books, while VIP players got Wake the Dead, which only got released to everyone yesterday as "the nightmare before 2022". Also released in October is Shipwrecked, which was released for VIP in August, and like WB is now 3/4 complete.

Oh, and I almost forgot to mention, besides a surge in gender of choice stories (which includes SW, WtD and the Greatest Mystery Ever), since the end of The Royal Franchise, there has been a surge in mature-rated stories, starting with SW and includes *spoiler alert* WtD and The Greatest Mystery Ever. Ok, I know the first mature story is Witness: a Paywall Romance, and TNA also has the rating, but I can handle the latter (I'm not in it for the romance anyway), and as I said, never in the life of Choices will I touch the former. SW also has the tag for sexual content, but I can also handle that one (again, I'm not in it for the romance). As for WtD and The Greatest Mystery Ever, these got the tag for containing graphic violence. Having said that, anything mature-rated is recommended for experienced players. Not to mention there's also the single LI wave as well. After we had Witness and TNA last year, this year we had WAH (you know, it's my nickname for that tragedy known as With Every Heartbeat), AVSP and SW, the first single LI book to be gender selectable, which allows players to play around according to their gender as well as their sexual orientation instead of sticking to the rigid "girl meets boy, girl pursues boy, girl marries boy" plot. Spoiler alert: the next OG VIP book, Ms Match (to be released next month) and The Greatest Mystery Ever are also single LI books.

And now, without further ado, let's get into the reviews.

A Very Scandalous Proposal
Rating: Meh

Overall the story is ok, it follows an American journalist trying to uncover the secrets of a British high society family and finding love in the process. At first we put up a showmance for the sake of the heir, our only LI, who has to get married before his 30th birthday to inherit the Barrington Mansion. While we're working on our expose, someone sabotages our work and leaks our findings to the tabloids, landing us in hot soup with the lord and lady, the heir's grandparents. Then we find out the culprit is the heir's best friend, who as it turns out did it because he's short of money, but seriously, his motives kind of scream "You're stealing him away from me!". I so wanted to punch Tommy right then and there. As for the characters, I kind of like Cecile and Juliet, the former for her friendliness and the latter for being professional, and I think they're great together. Then there's sweet, kind Genevive, who I helped gain the confidence to stand up to the annoying Hugo. While Hugo is a real jerk, Tommy really deserves a beating, as he got us into trouble with Duke and Duchess Montjoy. Those two are really convincing antagonists. This story is suited for beginners so that they know what Choices stories are like.

The Unexpected Heiress
Rating: EXCITING!

Another story featuring an American finding love among British high society, this book can be considered a prequel to AVSP. After all, who knew Lady Gemma would turn out to be Gemma Montjoy, 13th Duchess of Wessex? What's great about this story is that there are several unexpected twists and turns which are well executed, and as a result, while this is mainly a romantic drama, it also turns out to be a good mystery story. So, from the beginning, we know our sister was murdered, I mean the way she was calling for help, as well as her final moments, kind of gave that away. So why was Amelia murdered? At first, we were led to believe she owed money to someone, but then it turns out the recipient of Amelia's money was going through financial hardship, and Amelia sent the money to help them.

After learning everything from the McTavishes, I felt really sorry for them, and I'm glad I didn't think it was them. This leads us to believe Amelia was murdered for her political beliefs, as Mr McTavish mentioned that Amelia was very vocal when it comes to politics. We immediately have two suspects: the British ambassador to India and his attache, who I dislike because of their support for imperialism (In fact, I still think Britain and other former colonial countries owe their former colonies BIG! Real BIG!). Sure, Amelia was an anti-imperialist, and that's certainly a good motive for murder, What is more, the ambassador has some plants from India in his greenhouse, including a poisonous plant from which the poison used by the murderer is derived from.

But then, Mr Worthington points us to their common associate, Marquess Huntsbury, so we investigate his quarters and lo and behold, we discover he has a secret family in India, and immediately deduce that Amelia's discovery of the affair led the marquess to kill her. So we accuse him and hand him to the police, and that was it, it's over. Or is it? Guess what, we were wrong again! The marquess turns out to be the biggest red herring in the case, as only until before our forced marriage to Francis does the real murderer show herself: Marchioness Huntsbury. Sure, the discovery of the affair was related to the case, but it wasn't the direct cause. The real problem was that the marchioness isn't a British citizen, while the woman her husband had an affair with is, which meant Miss Whitcomb's children could threaten the marchioness' children's claim to their estate, and she wants her children to get their inheritance. Even so, I hate Marquess Huntsbury just as much, and hold him indirectly responsible for Amelia's death.

The LIs are good: John is adventurous, Gemma is outgoing and spirited, and Hugh is helpful. I also like kind and supportive Francis. Of course, the antagonists are good too, as I mentioned. Another good beginner book.

Rules of Engagement
Rating: Meh

Another story that is just ok, it follows a family as they get together on a Mediterranean cruise, and they have to complete certain assignments to win $100M left for them by their grandma, all while their scheming Aunt Lemonface and annoying cousin try to sabotage them. This series fits the bill for the Typical Romance Trilogy (so does D&D, even though one of the LIs is female). To understand the reasons behind this rating, I think it's best to analyse each book one by one.

Book 1: Girl Meets Boy

So, we start off like: "What? Nana left us a hundred million dollars each?! Woohoo!" "Yes, but in order to get the money, you have to complete these assignments by the end of the summer." We are then introduced to our tasks: we have to get married, Nicole has to do all the fun activities Nana wants her to do, Jess has to hold a job throughout the summer, and Alex... let's just say, he has to lie in the bed he made before Nana's passing. What do I mean by this? I'll get to that later. We're then introduced to our LIs: first we have Dean the bartender, then we have William the businessman, and it isn't until Chapter 6 when we meet Leo the European guy (Remember the name! He's going to be big. Well actually, he has a brother who's going to be big, but that's not really important now).

While there are several chapters dedicated to certain LIs, the more interesting parts are what our siblings have to go through. Nicole meets this girl who's being chased by Chaz for stealing the captain's hat, and they have a lot of fun together. Meanwhile, Jess found a job with the ship's restaurant, and then she discovers that one of her LIs is her boss. Now that's awkward. Not to mention, in Chapter 7, she has to serve the bratty teenage daughter of the ship's owner, Claire Fancypants, on her 16th birthday, and Claire pretty much tries to get Jess fired (which is why I prefer calling those rich snobs the Fancypants family). Then in Chapter 12, she has to serve uncle Antoine Fancypants, and she also has quite some accidents then. As for Alex... well, serves him right for not telling Nana his assistant isn't his girlfriend before it's too late.