Thread:MondlichtPanda/@comment-4786757-20191019200204/@comment-36836718-20191107161551

In this edit some things were changed where I am not sure they're all correct. At least one comma was added where it doesn't belong but I currently can't check the changes in previous chapters. But some things don't look right to me on first sight. I am behind in some books so I currently try to catch up. Still have to play Sunday's D&D chapter before the next one releases etc. In case any of you happen to be able to check, that would be great.

https://choices-stories-you-play.fandom.com/wiki/America%27s_Most_Eligible:_Wedding_Edition_Choices?diff=prev&oldid=272177

Some added commas look wrong grammar-wise and one achievement text was removed by the user...