Talk:Bloodbound, Book 1/@comment-34138917-20180615202345/@comment-35737020-20180616211008

I think some people hate it because they don’t realize if you select the right options you dont have to hook up with both of them.

As per writing, the “intimate” scene with Jax in chapter right before that one was written better by comparison. The scene was lead up to better, the cooking scene was cute and so was Jax talking about his grandma. The chapter 11 plot leading up to it seemed so forced and out of place so it felt like an obvious cash grap (“HURRY AND BY MORE DIAMONDS!”) lmao.

Its starting to be pecuilar that pretty much everytime we have pay diamonds to learn more about Jax’s life and/or spend extra time with him the writers always end up throwing in the making the main character & him go hormonally crazy with each other. The first time they meet they wrote the feeding scene to be erotic as possible. Then in chapter 10 they sex, then one chapter later they have sex again. Like damn lol. Nothing wrong with it but they could try harder to also develop their emotional/talk/date/friendship relationship factors like they do with the main character and the other characters in the book. I feel like the main character and Jax are always either biting each other, humping each other, or throwing innuendos at each other.