Thread:MondlichtPanda/@comment-3452092-20191209233429/@comment-36836718-20200107071411

Rory, I saw it but don't have time to answer in depth. Short form is I followed the example in the same paragraph of "In Chapter 4, Your Character can choose to protect her from the Saber Toothed Tiger. She then tears off a piece of her shirt to use as a bandage for his/her wound and tells you never to do that for her again, saying it's not worth it, possibly foreshadowing her moment of revealing she is dying." This is an easily understandable way of linking two connected sentences, showing that the second sentence depends on the first one (coherence and cohesion). Without the "then", I would read the second sentence as it happens no matter what. But now I have to leave. I will be offline for about 6-8 or 9 hours. If you want to discuss it further, this will have to wait until I come back. See you later.