User blog comment:StoryGirl83/Walkthrough Guide Discussion/@comment-35306687-20190613033122


 * I like the asterisks/bullets as-is.
 * I'm so used to saying "diamond choices" by now, but I have no objection to changing it to "premium choices" to be more consistent with Pixelberry.
 * I like the emojis!
 * I like the simpler first timed choice option: This is a timed choice.
 * I have no opinion on the spaces between emojis and numbers
 * I like denoting different paths differently, and ideally descriptively. "Path A/Path B/Path C" feels arbitrary to me, and is difficult to follow. I constantly have to scroll back up to remind myself which path I'm on. A more descriptive path title, e.g., character name if it's a choice between characters, would be more helpful (e.g., Liam/Drake/Hana/Maxwell)
 * It's very challenging when some paths have different numbers of choices than others, but they later converge so that the subsequent choices are numbered differently depending which path you took. I can't think of a better way to address it at the moment, but I do hope we settle on guidance for that.
 * Your example walkthrough looks great!