Thread:MondlichtPanda/@comment-37484301-20200411232318/@comment-4786757-20200530055011

Andisimon wrote: https://choices-stories-you-play.fandom.com/wiki/Isaac_%26_Lyra?diff=next&oldid=321717I could fix some grammar except for the last sentence where I don't exactly know how to fix it. It should be shattered instead of shatter but the rest?

Similar problem here https://choices-stories-you-play.fandom.com/wiki/Sofia_Russo?diff=321719&oldid=321601 And https://choices-stories-you-play.fandom.com/wiki/Amalas?diff=321723&oldid=320209 It just feels like its more counterproductive.