Thread:HSSCA(Rory)Lover!/@comment-36836718-20181213161553/@comment-36836718-20181230112939

A small portion of his/her edits contained grammar and interpunctuation corrections that may have been lost. So I am currently checking those affected pages if there are still some things to fix

for example on Han's page: I don't think it's correct to say "someone remarks how...". My dictionnary says it's rather "someone remarks on how..." or "someone remarks upon how". On Lina's page there is the if clause "If you give her a cash token, she will show genuine remorse for the accusations and states that the rumors were started by another contestant." I don't know if she states it no matter what, but in case she only says after getting the cash token, shouldn't it be "she will state" instead of "she states"? What do you think?