User blog comment:StoryGirl83/Walkthrough Guide Discussion/@comment-36836718-20190612063630

Some thoughts and suggestions...

1. Endless Summer Book 2 walkthrough listed some choices as premium choice (there is still one in chapter 14 in case you want to look) and imo it looks better than diamond choice.

2. I don't see why there should be problems with asterisk?

3. This is a timed choice with. or ! Doesn't matter to me

4. Sometimes I notice the sentence "order of choices is random" or "you only get the third choice in choice x if.." which is semantically not correct. You always choose between several options and not between further choices...

5. The place where we say that the order is random. I think it should always be on top, next to timed choice, so it's easy for everyone to see.

6. Long time ago we had some edit war starting concerning the use of hovers. I made a blog post back then and it was a tie between hover only and mixed version.

7. No opinion on space or no space between number and symbol

8. Emoji. I would like to have arrows up and down. Don't know if we need a red heart since the black heart shows red in mobile version anyway.

9. Numbering. Keep the numbering as easy as possible. Avoid things like "choice 2, 3, 4, or 5 depending on path" where possible, choice 1, 1.5, 1.75, or 5a, 5b, 5c. Even worse 5.a.1 not everyone will get what is meant

10. A choice where you can take a premium scene is not a diamond/premium choice. It's a normal choice.