Thread:Szmatan777/@comment-36836718-20190721174136/@comment-36277500-20191003110622

Yes. I was asking permission from Jadelady. I'll be very glad if you point the grammar mistakes, if you please?

I'm going to change also relation between Antony and Arin, and that part already was proofread by Jadelady.

https://choices-stories-you-play.fandom.com/wiki/User_blog:Szmatan777/Antony_(calling_dibs)

Can you proofread the "short" relationships? I'll be very grateful if you point those mistakes it in this thread.