Thread:MondlichtPanda/@comment-3452092-20190714133009/@comment-36836718-20190725093901

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I added the trivia about the wrong word. If any of you could proofread if it's easy to understand etc, please? There was some odd grammar that I tried to fix but I may not have caught it all....

Btw: is there a reason for Dylan being Dylan and not Dylan Joy?