User blog comment:HersheysAlmonds/Most Wanted FanFic/@comment-35562984-20180922081444/@comment-36606206-20180922101943

Great job on working on the chapter 1! :D

I love the fact that it doesn't focus on Dave & Sam lovey-dovey ship

I love how Dave and Sam are still in their character. They didn't go all lazy and focus on their crush for each other X'D T^T thank god...

I love how you end the chapter with almost a cliffhanger XD

I love how you made the narrator sound like the actualy narrator in the game (ooh! does it mean I earned 1 diamond as I've finished the chapter? XD you should put Earned 1 diamond in the end XD jk jk '3')

But what I really loved the most... is how Sam punches the wall XD That must've hurt...the wall! :'( Poor wall...