Thread:MondlichtPanda/@comment-3452092-20191209233429/@comment-36836718-20191223053336

Thebedazzleddementor wrote: Las Vegas location test is ready for feedback here. It's been a hot minute since I plated any of the books where it appears, and I also had a hard time finding pictures, so I'm not toally happy wiht it. Whatever suggestions people have would be great.

The only thing I noticed is that you put dancing in Vegas twice in a sentence. Otherwise it's really good.